My pitch
12A.M New York 1939 chasing a gang of gangsters. There are my enime's and i need to catch theme my name john carlten. his a evil crazy villain who will do any thing to kill me also he is a money lover, he will kill his family for money. he,s a smoker and a killer he does drug deals and from were i heard he meats the people in the ali and and then kill theme.
This is a movie full of danger and action and its breath taking, if you are a teenager and have the guts to sea this than my name ain't john Carleen. We tried to make deals with him but he tricket use also ran away three times but he ant by him self oh no he's got help.They call him the godfather, many are scared of him but not me.
I remember when he married a women and she turned out as a gold digger which means she didn't Married him for love she married him for money when he found out he killed her turned to mad man but i don't blame him .
I also got my own help they are called danger men they are six angry men, they are monstrers thats why i picket theme i call theme the big guns. Me john Carlton and the danguor men we will stop them in no time.This film is packet with crime, death, blood and revenge.
Than he found out he is got a son who wants to kill him but he isn't on our side. when he was six he was a good until he meet a person robing a bank than the criminal saw him than hit him in the head so he want crazy and evil.
sin city
Mise-en-scene: There on a roof. for the props there is the gun the lighter and sigert. there was only one
colour and that was the womens tress and it was red and the rest was black.
Editing: They have an animation scene for 5 seconds when they're kissing then it goes back to real life
and he kills her.
Camera: First its a middshot than we see the other actor coming in than its a close up of theme kissing.
Sound: You can hear the nirater speaking in the backround also the sound of the pistol when he kills
her and than the sound of thunder.
In a lonely place
Mise-en-scene: The glass of alcohol the book and pen he used to sign a kids book.
Editing: You sea him in his car and the credits are playing at the same time so it's not boring and also creats tension.
Camera: Its a close up of him in the car and also in the bar. its a middshot when he starts to fight with some guy because he is talking with his girlfriend.
Sound: The car horn, kids shooting, people are talking.
sunset boulevard
Mise-en-scene: Its set in usa californa. The props they used wear cameras.
Editing: The cridets are rolling while you see the camera moving and looking at the road and after the creidet it rose up and you can see the polich car's.
Camera: The have a midshoot of the police and the news people and the a farshot showing every thing than 10 seconds later they have a close up of the dead man in the pool.
sound: You can hair the music playing while the credits are rolling than when it fishes you can hair the police cars also the nirater is talking in the background.
This is a movie full of danger and action and its breath taking, if you are a teenager and have the guts to sea this than my name ain't john Carleen. We tried to make deals with him but he tricket use also ran away three times but he ant by him self oh no he's got help.They call him the godfather, many are scared of him but not me.
I remember when he married a women and she turned out as a gold digger which means she didn't Married him for love she married him for money when he found out he killed her turned to mad man but i don't blame him .
I also got my own help they are called danger men they are six angry men, they are monstrers thats why i picket theme i call theme the big guns. Me john Carlton and the danguor men we will stop them in no time.This film is packet with crime, death, blood and revenge.
Than he found out he is got a son who wants to kill him but he isn't on our side. when he was six he was a good until he meet a person robing a bank than the criminal saw him than hit him in the head so he want crazy and evil.
sin city
Mise-en-scene: There on a roof. for the props there is the gun the lighter and sigert. there was only one
colour and that was the womens tress and it was red and the rest was black.
Editing: They have an animation scene for 5 seconds when they're kissing then it goes back to real life
and he kills her.
Camera: First its a middshot than we see the other actor coming in than its a close up of theme kissing.
Sound: You can hear the nirater speaking in the backround also the sound of the pistol when he kills
her and than the sound of thunder.
In a lonely place
Mise-en-scene: The glass of alcohol the book and pen he used to sign a kids book.
Editing: You sea him in his car and the credits are playing at the same time so it's not boring and also creats tension.
Camera: Its a close up of him in the car and also in the bar. its a middshot when he starts to fight with some guy because he is talking with his girlfriend.
Sound: The car horn, kids shooting, people are talking.
sunset boulevard
Mise-en-scene: Its set in usa californa. The props they used wear cameras.
Editing: The cridets are rolling while you see the camera moving and looking at the road and after the creidet it rose up and you can see the polich car's.
Camera: The have a midshoot of the police and the news people and the a farshot showing every thing than 10 seconds later they have a close up of the dead man in the pool.
sound: You can hair the music playing while the credits are rolling than when it fishes you can hair the police cars also the nirater is talking in the background.
Target audience
My target audience is between 15 and 20 as it attracts young male and adults. It attracts young males because of the femme fatale and it attracts adults because of the mystery and betrayal. It's similar to sin city except instead of the female killing the male its the male killing the female which represents betrayal and hatred just like ours.
Locations
Character costume.
props
My character.
my character is a new police officer and his a misterious man who was dreaming of being a police officer he is 21 years old. His not married his son died because of members of gang he got shoot in the head, he has a big ego not selfish, he is a smoker he started it when his son got killed and he was in a shock. he ran away from home because of problems and then spent the rest of his life training to become a police man.
Other actors character
Here is a cop and this is a birds eye view of the character. He wears a typical cop uniform for noir as we can sea a fedora hat and a blazer with a tie.
the shadow concurs the scene to show his emotions and what his going throw. He has a typical doomed hero look, he looks very depressed and tired and something is going throw his mind.
the shadow concurs the scene to show his emotions and what his going throw. He has a typical doomed hero look, he looks very depressed and tired and something is going throw his mind.
Other actor character
In this i choose to have a mid shot of Shivani with her smoking to show what a dark hearted character she is and as the play goes she kills both the detective.
At first she was seen as a sex object but we wanted to show that she was more than that and that she was a killer as the saying goes don't judge a book by its cover.
She had to wear bright red lip stick to show she was a femma fatal and put on a black dress to show the other side of the good looking face.
At first she was seen as a sex object but we wanted to show that she was more than that and that she was a killer as the saying goes don't judge a book by its cover.
She had to wear bright red lip stick to show she was a femma fatal and put on a black dress to show the other side of the good looking face.
SCRIPT
Opening[TRANSITION FROM FOOTSTEPS OF POLICEMEN AND CREDITS TO POLICEMEN INTO CAFE][
We see two policemen walk into a cafe; they’re dressed in suits and fedora hats. One of the policemen looks around and catches the eyeof a woman sitting at a table by herself, she is wearing a dress.The policemen walk closer to the counter, as they walk closer thewoman drops some money on the floor and the policeman picks it upfor her. The woman and policeman look at each other flirtatiously. ] Detective Daniels Hey Lamar are you gonna come put you order in or what? Detective Lamar Yeah give me a second.[Detective Lamar walks to the counter, the walking and dialogue isdone in one shot.] Detective Daniels So who’s your little friend then? Detective Lamar You know I don’t have time for these things the new case is taking up all my time. Detective Daniels What, this Gingerbread man? Detective Lamar You don’t understand that guys deadly, really deadly. Detective Daniels Anyway can I have a coffee and a doughnut please? Detective Lamar Can I have a coffee and two doughnuts please?[Detective Lamar walks back to his table then Detective Danielsfollows him] Detective Daniels Hey Lamar I’m gonna head to the can yeah Detective Lamar Try not to get lost[The femme- fetale walks over to Detective Lamar’s table and sits down] Femme-fetale I’ve never been with such a handsome policeman like you before Detective Lamar Now, what’s that supposed to mean? [Femme- fetale whispers into detective’s ear ] Femme-fetale This.[Close-up of gun under the table, then femme-fetale shoots thedetective. We then cut to footsteps of the femme- fetale’s legs asshe’s walking towards the toilet, there is then cross cutting between the femme- fetale’s legs and detective Daniels in the bathroom. As detective Daniels opens the door he sees the femme-fetale standing there.] Detective Daniels Can I help you?[Femme-fetale shoots detective Daniels, as he falls to the floor thefemme- fetale drops a note that says ‘Run, run as fast as you
Opening[TRANSITION FROM FOOTSTEPS OF POLICEMEN AND CREDITS TO POLICEMEN INTO CAFE][
We see two policemen walk into a cafe; they’re dressed in suits and fedora hats. One of the policemen looks around and catches the eyeof a woman sitting at a table by herself, she is wearing a dress.The policemen walk closer to the counter, as they walk closer thewoman drops some money on the floor and the policeman picks it upfor her. The woman and policeman look at each other flirtatiously. ] Detective Daniels Hey Lamar are you gonna come put you order in or what? Detective Lamar Yeah give me a second.[Detective Lamar walks to the counter, the walking and dialogue isdone in one shot.] Detective Daniels So who’s your little friend then? Detective Lamar You know I don’t have time for these things the new case is taking up all my time. Detective Daniels What, this Gingerbread man? Detective Lamar You don’t understand that guys deadly, really deadly. Detective Daniels Anyway can I have a coffee and a doughnut please? Detective Lamar Can I have a coffee and two doughnuts please?[Detective Lamar walks back to his table then Detective Danielsfollows him] Detective Daniels Hey Lamar I’m gonna head to the can yeah Detective Lamar Try not to get lost[The femme- fetale walks over to Detective Lamar’s table and sits down] Femme-fetale I’ve never been with such a handsome policeman like you before Detective Lamar Now, what’s that supposed to mean? [Femme- fetale whispers into detective’s ear ] Femme-fetale This.[Close-up of gun under the table, then femme-fetale shoots thedetective. We then cut to footsteps of the femme- fetale’s legs asshe’s walking towards the toilet, there is then cross cutting between the femme- fetale’s legs and detective Daniels in the bathroom. As detective Daniels opens the door he sees the femme-fetale standing there.] Detective Daniels Can I help you?[Femme-fetale shoots detective Daniels, as he falls to the floor thefemme- fetale drops a note that says ‘Run, run as fast as you
weekly review
Week 1: In week one we had to deside who does what for example i am the producer, Farhad was the manager and Zara was editor ect. we had to make the script and told who was in the play and what character they are, also we had to go to the green room and sir showed us the props and every thing els.
Week 2: In this week we had to learn our lines and we had to read every thing so we know what happens in the play first. We had to get the camera and went to the location wear we shoot the scene to film our first scene we had a bit of problems with the camera and the backround because their was a lot of modern images at the back.
Week 3: This week we had to go back to the piverlen because we didnt finsh some of scene where the femfatal starts to flert with
the officer we wear gone film it but six formers came in and it became to busy and they wear talking and we couldn't
finish it so we went back to he green room and uploaded all the videos that we had.
Week 4: In week four we went to the prevalent and we had a bit left to do in that part so we came after school to the green room and filmed the toilet scene and we planed to do th piverlen scene in the next lesson we had which was on a friday i learnt how to take amazing shots and were to start to film from and it was good
Week 5: In week 5 sir said we had to finsh every thing to start filming again and he said i didnt finsh it but i loged on and showed him i really finished. but i still had to upload my scene anlises (the drawing) i stayed after break to finsh it all completely. in the double lesson we just had one secen to film because we looked back and the scene wasnt that good but insted of filming it i said lets stay and finsh editing and finding the song for our opining because it will take us a long time for us to chang and get the camara ready also go to the poovilene so we will do that in week 6. i had to find the song for our opining also the sound effects because i am the sound producer.
Week 6: In week six i had to find our opining soundtrack because i was the sound producer also i had to find sound effects of the
death scene were i died in the toilet. after i found some of the sound effects i went to help Nadiya edit the some of the
scenes and i learnt how to add the sound effects to the scene and uploaded the soundtrack.
Week 7: my job was to find the sound track again because we lost the one we found in the first place. So i found it and download
it to the mac and put it in my usb, i also had to find the gun sound effect. we had to think of a name for our movie but we still
didn't find a name so we stopped wasting time and started to think of the credits and in what order the names go and who's
name is gone be in the credits i learnt how to download the video and sound track and save it to the usb and get it to the
other iMac.
Week 8: in week 8 i went to the pirvillan to check if it was free because we had one scene to re-film but there were too many people there so we went back and improved our film i had to find another soundtrack because sir said that one is to common and if we want extra marks we had to find another one but it was a bit of a time wast because we were meant to find the sound track 4 days ago because we were trying to find another place to film.
Week 1: In week one we had to deside who does what for example i am the producer, Farhad was the manager and Zara was editor ect. we had to make the script and told who was in the play and what character they are, also we had to go to the green room and sir showed us the props and every thing els.
Week 2: In this week we had to learn our lines and we had to read every thing so we know what happens in the play first. We had to get the camera and went to the location wear we shoot the scene to film our first scene we had a bit of problems with the camera and the backround because their was a lot of modern images at the back.
Week 3: This week we had to go back to the piverlen because we didnt finsh some of scene where the femfatal starts to flert with
the officer we wear gone film it but six formers came in and it became to busy and they wear talking and we couldn't
finish it so we went back to he green room and uploaded all the videos that we had.
Week 4: In week four we went to the prevalent and we had a bit left to do in that part so we came after school to the green room and filmed the toilet scene and we planed to do th piverlen scene in the next lesson we had which was on a friday i learnt how to take amazing shots and were to start to film from and it was good
Week 5: In week 5 sir said we had to finsh every thing to start filming again and he said i didnt finsh it but i loged on and showed him i really finished. but i still had to upload my scene anlises (the drawing) i stayed after break to finsh it all completely. in the double lesson we just had one secen to film because we looked back and the scene wasnt that good but insted of filming it i said lets stay and finsh editing and finding the song for our opining because it will take us a long time for us to chang and get the camara ready also go to the poovilene so we will do that in week 6. i had to find the song for our opining also the sound effects because i am the sound producer.
Week 6: In week six i had to find our opining soundtrack because i was the sound producer also i had to find sound effects of the
death scene were i died in the toilet. after i found some of the sound effects i went to help Nadiya edit the some of the
scenes and i learnt how to add the sound effects to the scene and uploaded the soundtrack.
Week 7: my job was to find the sound track again because we lost the one we found in the first place. So i found it and download
it to the mac and put it in my usb, i also had to find the gun sound effect. we had to think of a name for our movie but we still
didn't find a name so we stopped wasting time and started to think of the credits and in what order the names go and who's
name is gone be in the credits i learnt how to download the video and sound track and save it to the usb and get it to the
other iMac.
Week 8: in week 8 i went to the pirvillan to check if it was free because we had one scene to re-film but there were too many people there so we went back and improved our film i had to find another soundtrack because sir said that one is to common and if we want extra marks we had to find another one but it was a bit of a time wast because we were meant to find the sound track 4 days ago because we were trying to find another place to film.
evaluation
We had to choose our props carefully because if we start to film it with the props we already have than we could not change it we had a rang of props to use for example noir hats, pref cases, a police badge ect. the props we decided to chose is film noir hats, a gun, a police badge, money, a cigarette, a cup and a note saying run run as fast as you can and thats all the props that we used.
The location we decided to chose was the pavilion because it was the closes place that looked like a diner and we tried to make it look like a diner from the 1940's but it was a hard job because there were pictures every were not to mention computers and the T.V. .The clothes that we used were a film noir hat and a placer but the femme fatale wore some thing els.
The person who was filming this was nada because she was the director and i used it once or twice it was harder than it looked but nada was the main person who was filming. At first the camera shots wearnt that good because we just filmed from one angle but than sir told us to film from different angles they had to be weird and wounderful but in one lesson tanzil helped us with the filming and how the camera angels showed be like.
We didn't add voice over we just let our acting do the job. nada and sera were in-charge of the editing and they were good editors for example when the femme fatal was going to kill farhad the screen went dark than she came to kill me. The director farhad decided not to us the green screen because there wasn't that much space in the green screen. Nada and shara the editors decided to use final cut pro for editing the new skill i learnt was how to put what ever scene i want in any order i wanted to and how to make the back round black so it looks like the other films noir.
The purpose of the opining sequence was to show the characters and who they were we also used some thing called enigma code which means a question to be answered later on, ours was when i asked farhad are you still after the ginger bread man and so the audience thinks it a dangerous man but it turns out it was a women who wants revange and the rest were just me and farhad we were police men. The characters were me shivane and Farhad, shivane was the bad one i was the police man and so was farhad i think our characters did fit noir characters because shivane was a femme fatale and we were the police that always get killed.
To attract our audience we added tension to a lot of the scenes for example when Shivane tried to kill me and she was getting closer to the toilet and we had two cameras one was filming me and one was filming Shivane getting closer. We had to speak noir language but don't worry it was still english what i meant was we spoke like we are egoistic and we were more important than the other person thats what noir films are all about. tension, drama, atmosphere was created using the 4 techniques/elements and they were miss-en-scene, camerawork, sound, and editing.
To get everyone out of there seat we used camera angels and sound to create tension also our costumes made us look very important but we did get killed of in the beginning. I was filming once because our camraman wasn't in and i was good at it because i filming from different angles. The editors used a gun shot sound because our fake guns didn't sound like real guns and because i was the sound producers i had to find a gun shot sound i also had to find our opining theme song. Our editing was good thanks to our editors the audience liked it when Shivani shoot Farhad than the screen went black for 3 seconds than the camera focused on me. I think WB would make this type of film because the film has tension and every thing.
Our target audience were aged between 12 and 30 because this film has action appropriate for teenagers and adults in it and we also wanted the audience to think that me and far-had were the main characters but theirs a twist in the first 2 minutes of the film and when she killed me she left a note saying "run run as fast as you can" which would leave the audience thinking what dose that mean and thats why its aimed for people aged between 12 and 30. So we used enigma code by Shivane leaving the note because no one nows what it means but it draws tension to the audience and later on it gets solved.
The genre of the movie was film noir. sadly we didn't choose to add narration because the audience new everything by the actions and what we meant and every thing. Our atmosphere created a lot of tension.
overall i think our film did well because we used everything and i was the sound producer and choose the perfect theme song and i really think that we did well. I have learnt a lot of new skills for example how to use final cut pro,
how to film from weird and wonderful angels and team work how to communicate and every thing.
The location we decided to chose was the pavilion because it was the closes place that looked like a diner and we tried to make it look like a diner from the 1940's but it was a hard job because there were pictures every were not to mention computers and the T.V. .The clothes that we used were a film noir hat and a placer but the femme fatale wore some thing els.
The person who was filming this was nada because she was the director and i used it once or twice it was harder than it looked but nada was the main person who was filming. At first the camera shots wearnt that good because we just filmed from one angle but than sir told us to film from different angles they had to be weird and wounderful but in one lesson tanzil helped us with the filming and how the camera angels showed be like.
We didn't add voice over we just let our acting do the job. nada and sera were in-charge of the editing and they were good editors for example when the femme fatal was going to kill farhad the screen went dark than she came to kill me. The director farhad decided not to us the green screen because there wasn't that much space in the green screen. Nada and shara the editors decided to use final cut pro for editing the new skill i learnt was how to put what ever scene i want in any order i wanted to and how to make the back round black so it looks like the other films noir.
The purpose of the opining sequence was to show the characters and who they were we also used some thing called enigma code which means a question to be answered later on, ours was when i asked farhad are you still after the ginger bread man and so the audience thinks it a dangerous man but it turns out it was a women who wants revange and the rest were just me and farhad we were police men. The characters were me shivane and Farhad, shivane was the bad one i was the police man and so was farhad i think our characters did fit noir characters because shivane was a femme fatale and we were the police that always get killed.
To attract our audience we added tension to a lot of the scenes for example when Shivane tried to kill me and she was getting closer to the toilet and we had two cameras one was filming me and one was filming Shivane getting closer. We had to speak noir language but don't worry it was still english what i meant was we spoke like we are egoistic and we were more important than the other person thats what noir films are all about. tension, drama, atmosphere was created using the 4 techniques/elements and they were miss-en-scene, camerawork, sound, and editing.
To get everyone out of there seat we used camera angels and sound to create tension also our costumes made us look very important but we did get killed of in the beginning. I was filming once because our camraman wasn't in and i was good at it because i filming from different angles. The editors used a gun shot sound because our fake guns didn't sound like real guns and because i was the sound producers i had to find a gun shot sound i also had to find our opining theme song. Our editing was good thanks to our editors the audience liked it when Shivani shoot Farhad than the screen went black for 3 seconds than the camera focused on me. I think WB would make this type of film because the film has tension and every thing.
Our target audience were aged between 12 and 30 because this film has action appropriate for teenagers and adults in it and we also wanted the audience to think that me and far-had were the main characters but theirs a twist in the first 2 minutes of the film and when she killed me she left a note saying "run run as fast as you can" which would leave the audience thinking what dose that mean and thats why its aimed for people aged between 12 and 30. So we used enigma code by Shivane leaving the note because no one nows what it means but it draws tension to the audience and later on it gets solved.
The genre of the movie was film noir. sadly we didn't choose to add narration because the audience new everything by the actions and what we meant and every thing. Our atmosphere created a lot of tension.
overall i think our film did well because we used everything and i was the sound producer and choose the perfect theme song and i really think that we did well. I have learnt a lot of new skills for example how to use final cut pro,
how to film from weird and wonderful angels and team work how to communicate and every thing.